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Realms Adjoined: Further Adjoining
The Nameless city

As our story begins we open to The Inferno, a local bar here in Nameless. As we enter we see all sorts of  “people” have gathered here to drink or talk. The noise in the bar is a mix of hard rock and various languages being spoken. This bar is a safe haven for all kinds, but suddenly the door opens and everybody's eyes fall on the man who walks in. Even here they still fear him.

Talon sits down at the bar, “Willie, bring me something ruff.” He says as the bar once again returns to normal. With in moments he returns with their famous drink called Inferno, a mixture of drinks and other “things”  that will knock you on your ass.  Talon drains half the glass in one gulp. “Hey man you ok, normaly you finish that in one gulp and threaten me for making it to weak.” Willie said  standing there in the usuall bartender stance. We see Talon look around top see if anybody is looking at him.  “Fuck you willie” talon says as the drains the rest of the glass and walks way tword the table in the back. “Hello Tiberius.” Talon sits down across from a woman. Her name is Sara, Talon looks around at the room, “sorry i'm late but something happened, some that fucked with me bad.” Sara moved closer to him “ something fucked with you, the man who stood flat footed and cussed out both of the big two out, the man who only in his boxers called the queen of the drogt hell world a cock sucking devil bitch.” She laughed until she saw he was serious, ”Ok what happened, my love?”  she asked takening his hand.

“It all started....” he begin.

Talon ducked down behind his dodge, crap was flying every where, fireballs and various other things were sticking to the side of his car. “shit i just had this damn thing fixed.” Talon raised up and opened fire with his guns. He heard on of the grunt, that was all he needed as he jumped over the car and drew his sword. he was able to stab one of the creatures the other one turned and ran. “Not so brave when your all alone huh shit face.” he yelled it.  “That wasn't really called for, after all there are children present”   Talon turned and pointed his gun. There in the darkness of the ally way he could see two figures walk forward. “Mandy, perhaps we should leave the nice gential man to his duty, please.”  a boy in a red shirt and a black kind of hat stood there with a girl with blond hair. “You have no noise.” Talon said “Wow, a bigger version of billy, come on Double D, I'm not picking up another side kick.”  Talon watched them go suddenly.....
(“Wait, a girl and a boy freaked you out, your losing your touch Tiberius.” she said with a laugh. “Let me finish.” he said thinking back.)


..... Talon watched as the demon he thought was dead raised up talon pointed his gun at it, but something happened. The demons arm lashed out and knocked the boys hat off. everything seemed to freeze, and when talon came to the boy and girl were gone. the demon was clawing at his eyes and had turned a lighter side of white. Talon raised and lowered the gun almost at the same time and shot the thing. then he turned and vomited in the near by trash can.

“What did you see?” She asked looking deep into his eyes. Talons hands were shaking “I can't describe it, i can't even begin, but i know one thing. not even god, the devil or james himself could begin to believe what i saw.” Talon sat back in his chair, and finished his drink.

Now we leave The Inferno and our hero to ponder....

“Some ending.”

Huh, who are you two

“Mandy please why must you always bother people after their stories are over?”

“If it was done right i wouldn't have to, now listen you, the next time you attempt to even begin to write about me and my friends again remember this is some what a PG story.”

Ok shit no nose

“Mandy, please put down the bat, i'm sure he didn't mean it that way!”

“Oh dear, well until  next time.”
©2007-2009 ~TalonAlmasy
:icontalonalmasy:

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i did this for:icondmajorboss:

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:icondmajorboss:
I can honestly say that I was laughing out loud as I read this...and I also found out that my room has quite an echo.

^_^

Because of how well I know Talon, his adventures and such, I connected to this quite a bit. Indeed, Double D must have something incredible under his hat to shake up a man like Talon.

Your style has always been one that I like, and one that has helped me so often to evolve. And, for the ending, you did a nice touch with them going into the Fourth Wall. Again, such an echo that laughter can produce.

Great work here, and I thank you greatly for taking the time to bring this forth. Quite an enjoyable read.

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All that has ever been created was done so for a reason, even if that reason is just for it to be.
:iconthawk:
Having read the Realms Adjoined series I must say I enjoyed your take. I'm not familar with Talon but he sounds like a badass. I laughed when Mandy threatened you(the narrator) with a bat. Breaking the fourth wall was handled well I thought.

This was a very good read.

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I really got to stop procastinating. Eh, I'll do it tomorrow. :sleep:
:icontalonalmasy:
thanks

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:yoda:Quondo Omni Flunkus Mortati (When All Else Fails, Play Dead.) :threaten:
:icontalonalmasy:
i'm glad you liked it. I felt i could have done better if i would have spent more time. by the way have they reviled what is under his hat?

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:yoda:Quondo Omni Flunkus Mortati (When All Else Fails, Play Dead.) :threaten:
:icondmajorboss:
Not just yet. His head is still a mystery to so many.

^_^

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All that has ever been created was done so for a reason, even if that reason is just for it to be.
:iconthawk:
Your welcome.

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I really got to stop procastinating. Eh, I'll do it tomorrow. :sleep:

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